Becca and suggestion #85 group - - you decide if any part of the following version fits into your design. I thought the last sentence in your proposed amendment was not as elegant as the previous sentences. And then things went from there. Below is an workup from the SC versoin to the suggestion #85 version - to the edited version I offer you. I tried to work with the spirit of the SC revision and the #85 version in making my comments and edits. Best. (yes I’m a delegate too).
Study Commission Version (with amendment from suggestion #85 edits)
Section C-2.3. Inspirations. (74 words)
As Unitarian Universalists, we use, and are inspired by, sacred and the world’s religions and wisdom traditions, by science, arts and other secular sources of knowledge and meaning, by the creative arts, which open our hearts to life’s joys and sorrows, and by the direct experience of wonder and mystery which expands our minds and spirit. secular understandings that help us to live into our values . We respect the histories, contexts and cultures in which they were created and are currently practiced. These sources ground us and sustain us in ordinary, difficult, and joyous times. Grateful for the religious ancestries we inherit and the diversity which enriches our faith. We honor the pluralism of our lineage. Mindful of the cultures in which they evolved**,** we are called to ever deepen and expand our wisdom sources of inspiration.
Section C-2.3. Inspirations Amendment Suggestion # 85 (92 words)
“As Unitarian Universalists, we are inspired by the world’s religions and wisdom traditions, by science and other secular sources of knowledge and meaning, by the creative arts, which open our hearts to life’s joys and sorrows, and by the direct experience of wonder and mystery which expands our minds and spirit. These sources ground us and sustain us in ordinary, difficult, and joyous times. We honor the pluralism of our lineage. Moving forward, we will continue to explore and build upon Unitarian Universalism’s sources, mindful of the cultures in which they evolved.”
My Changes to Suggestion #85 that I was inspired to put forward to this group.
“As Unitarian Universalists, we are inspired by the world’s religions and wisdom traditions, by science**, arts** and other secular sources of knowledge and meaning, by the creative arts, which open our hearts to life’s joys and sorrows, and by the direct experience of wonder and mystery which expands our minds and spirit. These sources ground us and sustain us in ordinary, difficult, and joyous times. We honor the pluralism of our lineage. Mindful of the cultures in which they evolved, Moving forward, we will continue to explore and build upon Unitarian Universalism’s sources, mindful of the cultures in which they evolved.”, we are called to ever deepen and expand our sources of inspiration.
My Changes for Suggestion #85 - edits completed (87)
As Unitarian Universalists we are inspired by the world’s religions and wisdom traditions, science, arts and other secular sources of knowledge and meaning which open our hearts to life’s joys and sorrows, and by the direct experience of wonder and mystery which expands our minds and spirit. These sources ground us and sustain us in ordinary, difficult, and joyous times. We honor the pluralism of our lineage. Mindful of the cultures in which they evolved, we are called to ever deepen and expand our sources of inspiration.
My reasons for agreement with suggestion #85 amendment to Section C-2.3. Inspirations
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strike: “use, and”: the list of inspirations that follow “we are inspired” are not always in use or ours to use. It is enough to state we are inspired. “use, and” could be left in as well.
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strike: ", sacred and secular understandings that help us to live into our values . Secular is kept and sacred is described in the inserted words that follow:
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add: “the world’s religions and wisdom traditions, by science and other secular sources of truth and meaning and by the direct experience of wonder and mystery which expands our minds and spirit.” It was important to the amendment group to expand/define the intent of sacred.
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strike: " that help us to live into our values. Inspirations can serve many purposes including helping UUs live their values - I could not think of a reason to insist on keeping this phrase. The Study Committee reasons might be compelling to keep it. Help is described in a sentence that follows - retained from the SC revision " These sources ground us and sustain us in ordinary, difficult, and joyous times." Help described, the phrase “that help…” may not be needed.
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strike: We respect the histories, contexts and cultures in which they were created and are currently practiced. I believe the amendment intends that the important message of respect for the histories, contexts and cultures is contained in the combination of the second to last sentence of the amendment, “We honor the pluralism of our lineage” and the first half of the last sentence, “Mindful of the cultures in which they evolved…”.
a. Religion is now part of the first sentence of inspirations “world religions.” Religion remains very much a part of inspirations.
b. I read that the SC revision using "ancestries we inherit “is rephrased as “honor the pluralism of our lineage.”
c. I am not as comfortable inheriting (western legacy view) as I am honoring what came before and the use of pluralism is a direct reference to our sacred beings diverse experience (Pluralism). Making use of pluralism is another bit of inspiration on the part of the group.
My Reasons for Changes to Suggestion #85Amendement.
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Add: “arts” and strike “by the creative arts”, in just having arts, all arts are included and art is now described (along with science) as an “other” secular source of knowledge and meaning. (shorter too).
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Last sentence changes: reordering to have the last sentence start with Mindful of the cultures in which they evolved… (what are we compelled to do?). I feel that this last phrase could go either way, with the amended "we will continue to explore, but I believe that a slightly amended SC revised version “we are called to…” feels more UU to me.
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change the SC revised version’s “wisdom” to sources of inspiration. Inspiration can fuel wisdom, and many other human aspirations. It felt right that we end the description of inspiration by mindfully expanding our sources of inspiration, leaving open the qualities that that inspiration imbues.