#63 | Robert Shoemaker | Too Wordy

Submission 63
Robert Shoemaker
unitarian society of Ridgewood, NJ

What is your suggestion or idea?

I greatly prefer the current version of Article II over the proposed new versionl I like the fact that the existing article is short and clearn. I feel that the new
version is much too wordy. Lets not make a change just for the sake of
saying we made a change.

What is the reason for your amendment idea?

see above

Have you discussed this idea with your congregation or other UUs?

I have discussed my ideas with many others in my congregation. Many of us agree that the new version is too wordy and that we prefer the existing version.