UU Fellowship of Madison County (Richmond, KY) 3726
Current Proposed Revision (with suggested strike-throughs):
Pluralism. We celebrate that we are all sacred beings diverse in culture, experience, and theology. We covenant to learn from one another in our free and responsible search for truth and meaning. We embrace our differences and commonalities with Love , curiosity, and respect.
Suggested Amendment (with new language in bold, and also re-ordered sentences):
Diversity. We celebrate the diversity of life – including human diversity in personalities, cultures, experiences, and beliefs. We embrace our differences and commonalities with compassion , curiosity, and respect. We learn from one another in our free and responsible search for truth and meaning.
The name of
this Value “fell flat” for some of us, so we suggest it be changed from “Pluralism”
to “Diversity.” To us it sounds more
poetic. We celebrate the diversity of ALL
life, so that naturally flows into celebrating the diversity of HUMAN life,
including our personalities, cultures (plural), experiences (plural), and
beliefs (plural). “Celebrating the
diversity of life” continues concepts from the Value of Interdependence and has echoes of a word used in an earlier Draft: “evolution”. It can include the familiar use of diversity
in human resource term of race, gender, etc., but it also allows for additional
meanings in terms of diversity of how our minds work – our personalities and our
beliefs. The word “Pluralism” cannot do all of these things.
We also suggest
switching the order of the last two sentences, because FIRST we embrace our
differences, THEN we can learn from them.
suggest reducing religious language by deleting “sacred,” “theology,” and
“covenant,” and reducing the ill-defined use of the word “love.”
Our Fellowship had a democratic approach to the Amendment process. While a straw poll indicated a slim majority would prefer to keep Article II as it is, the other votes indicated we should try to come up with Amendments that could conceivably change some “no” votes to “yes.” We began writing this Amendment in response to input from the Fellowship during two Sunday Services. We later word-smithed a suggested Amendment with our weekly zoom group. Finally, the full Fellowship had an opportunity to review this written Amendment. No objections were voiced.