Submission 22
Rev. Elizabeth Sollie
Cascade Unitarian Universalist Fellowship (East Wenatchee, WA) 8313
What is your suggestion or idea?
Hello, My congregation and myself generally loved the proposed changes. The comment I heard again and again is that they are too wordy and won’t fit on a bookmark. Shorter and sweeter. For myself, I think they lack a bit of poetry–but the substance is wonderful. Thanks for all the work and for trying to make a gazillion people satisfied.
What is the reason for your amendment idea?
I am not proposing an amendment–because I think you will have plenty–just asking for you to keep a weather eye out for brevity and poetry in other proposed changes.
Have you discussed this idea with your congregation or other UUs?
Yes–I am channeling feedback to you.