As discussed in the Blue Boat Passengers group on Facebook, I like both your more succinct amendment here, and the direction that our and @Janet 's congregation (as well as others in this section) are going, with longer inclusion of Sources. I hope our delegates/congregants can all get together and discuss soon! Ours has finally been posted. Although the formatting didn’t work when I uploaded it, I added simple redlining using brackets and bolding in a comment below the post.
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