#270 | Ken Shilling | Reorder Sentences in Inclusion Section

Submission 270
Ken Shilling
Paint Branch Unitarian Universalist Church (Adelphi, MD) 4025

What is your suggestion or idea?

Sec c-2-4 Inclusion - REORDER SENTENCES
We strive to be an association of congregations that truly welcomes all persons who share our values. [We realize that ]systems of power, privilege and oppression have traditionally created barriers for persons and groups with particular identities, ages, abilities, and histories. We pledge to replace such barriers with ever-widening circles of solidarity and mutual respect. We commit to being an association of congregations that a empowers and enhances everyone’s participation, especially those with historically marginalized identities.

What is the reason for your amendment idea?

Paragraph needed parallel structure, arranged in order of emphasis.

Have you discussed this idea with your congregation or other UUs?

My idea

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